Blog post due by Thursday-- what do you think you need to do to revise your WC essay? 400 words due by midnight. You will have some time to work on this in class as well -- we will begin it on Tuesday during class. To start off my revision of my written coursework essay I would create a better thesis statement. I would have it clarify more about my Literary analysis and my performance. I would make it so that it outlined what my literary analysis and my performance parts were about and how I would structure it so that they just flowed together. I want to add more background information about the story of the glass menagerie. The next thing I would do to revise it was added quotes. I had quotes but I had just forgotten to go and put them in because I was still trying to cite them. The next thing that I would work on is my performance part. I want to add more info about what I did to prepare for my performance. I want to talk about how I think I did in my perform...
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There are a couple of things that make the performance of a poem good. The first one is a costume, a costume can help a lot. This will help to make the character of the poem come alive and give a visual representation of them. The next way is with props. Props will help because they also give a visual representation and they also help to engage the audience in the performance. Another way to bring a poem to life in a performance is to act out some of the ideas in the poem because it will help to show the meaning of the poem as well. The last thing that helps is good background music or noises. These will help to show the emotion in the poem and also show the audience the rhythm of the poem.