Blog post due by Thursday-- what do you think you need to do to revise your WC essay? 400 words due by midnight. You will have some time to work on this in class as well -- we will begin it on Tuesday during class.


To start off my revision of my written coursework essay I would create a better thesis statement.  I would have it clarify more about my Literary analysis and my performance. I would make it so that it outlined what my literary analysis and my performance parts were about and how I would structure it so that they just flowed together.  I want to add more background information about the story of the glass menagerie. The next thing I would do to revise it was added quotes. I had quotes but I had just forgotten to go and put them in because I was still trying to cite them. The next thing that I would work on is my performance part.  I want to add more info about what I did to prepare for my performance. I want to talk about how I think I did in my performance and also what I could do to improve my performance. Lastly, I want to add more about what our performance was about. I want to put more in about what we did as a group to prepare for it as well. I need to add more about every part of this I just need work on this part of my paper way more.  I have a lot of information that I can add for this and if I add it then my paper will be much better. If I add it then it would be just like my literature analysis. The next part that I would work on is my conclusion. I want to add more info about the book to this. I also want to add more about both my literature analysis and my performance part of my paper.

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