add a fight between The beautiful angel and the horrid devil after "right now I’m the only one who doing something productive, and helping you out."

add lines for the son at the beginning when the mother is putting the son to bed add monologue for the son after the scene with the mother.

denny is playing the son he will add his own lines(reading his book for hw)

script done by Jan 14

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