Ib grade

for Sams Lit analysis I would give her a 4.  This is because I felt that she could have talked a little more about the themes or symbols present in her scene.  Then for her performance part, I would give her a 10.  My reasoning for this is because I felt that she did a very good job of describing what she did to prepare, what she did to act better and she analyzed the lines from the scene.  lastly, for her language portion, I would give her a 5.  This is because she used very strong words for describing details in her paper and also because everything flowed really well.  For Julias Lit analysis I would give her a 4.  this Is because I would have liked if she talked more about what the themes meant to the story.  Then her performance piece I would give her a 9.  This is because I felt she could have gone more in depth about her performance.  lastly, for her language portion, I would have given her a 5.  My reasoning for this is because all around the paper flowed really well.

After reading and grading both Sam and Julias papers it has made me realize a couple of things that I could use to benefit the paper that I had not realized before.  The first was using stronger language.  This will not only make my paper sound better but could make it longer and just all around flow better.  The other was going more in-depth about how I acted in my scene.